Thread:BlackDragonKid/@comment-26889090-20190127050323/@comment-31191359-20190127060914

Thanks! Sorry if I come off as rude at any time.

So, in a nutshell, the biggest two things I noticed about the style here is the circle tool, leaving the head looking like some kind of melon with a slight bump on it for the cheek, and massive eyes. Now, nothing's wrong with massive eyes...but here, it's kinda...too much. It's making the characters seem a bit too disproportionate, and it just bugged me.

Now, to smaller details, the ears, especially on the bear, really seem to be the wrong size. The dog's (i think her name's Spotty, correct me if im wrong...) ears are too big, the bear's ears are too small. The ears just look too strange, maybe work on that...

The top hat on the bear's head (this is nitpicky of me) is far too small...I needn't say much more about that!

The hands are kinda...what-

Im not concerned that there's probably a dead kid in that bear, but rather the strange proportions of the hand. That just doesn't look realistic, it took me about a few minutes to realize they have the right amount of fingers, really messed with my head.

The shading, while appearing a bit more appealing than some kinds of shading, is really uneven, and doesn't look realistic. The reflected light kinda does look cool, though...

The noses are too small, I don't think I have to add something to that.

For the dog, (sorry I can't remember names for the life of me ehajkwaf) the way you drew the shown endoskeleton on the legs could have been shaded a lot better, it just looked like it's a part of the fur...

And the legs are too thick.

And...done.