Thread:Butterflyunicorn/@comment-26186871-20190424211711/@comment-26186871-20190503012153

(So far, it's good. Though I will tell you if you're breaking canon of the PCW so far. You made Adipiscing, so you should know how to be in-character for her. :3)

(Since some parts of Part 8 were redundant, like the agents going to Canada, and it all leading to nothing, I've changed things up a bit when making Part 8. But they still met Adipiscing the same way-They just never wasted their time in Canada. I also fixed things up a bit so that they're talking about the kinds of sea otters within the islands they're actually at, since it's NOT the North American river otter! Fortunately, that doesn't actually change anything about how to find them. And just as I said before, I ended it RIGHT when she appeared. I didn't include her lines yet-That's going to be how Part 9 opens.)